and in my case, line by line..Hadrian go build your walls. 7069 lines in the story and each one is being scrutinised. I have added on to the section I talked about previously. I deleted so much of another chapter that I'm even more in the hole than when I started this edit three days ago.
That doesn't really matter, the point is the story is stronger and better.
I've wrung my story telling ability out to nothing today, I've stopped doing lines and re-writes for the day.
Monday I hope to get two more copies into the mail for the guinea pig readers. Now I wish that I had waited a week, and sent out this new improved Hadrian's Wall.